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Sunday 30 July 2017

Explanation: What family means to me

What family means to me

WALT write an explanation

Success Criteria
I must have strong reason
I must have correct punctuation


Family is one the most important things in your life so if I were you I would spend as much time with my family throughout my life, you never know what comes around in your family's life including yours.


For family is everything to me because they have feed,looked after me and always supporting me and if that is you family then you should be grateful for they have done to you for over the past years from when you were born to this moment and to me I am very grateful for what they do.


For me I spend as much time with my family as I can because you will never what will to your family's life and your life especially mine and your mum because they are the ones that have gave birth to and looked after you throughout all this time. Me and my mum are very close we will do everything together like have launch, go out to the park and even cleaning the house. And if you are very close to any of your family members then enjoy most of your life with them.


And here is the final bit of my story. To me family is a huge thing in my life and if family means nothing to you then what the hell is wrong with you. But for me I have not seen my parents in eight years and I am very excited of going back to america and I hope that you have learnt something from my story.  

Saturday 29 July 2017

It's ok to make mistakes ( Poem )

WALT: Write creatively on the topic from personal experiences.

It's ok to make mistakes

I smashed my cousins tablet against the wall
He was so angry
He is the oldest of all
I ask for forgiveness
That didn’t happen
But in my mind I felt a little stubborn


After a while I tried again
And still no reply from him
I ask to be his slave
And finally yes from the older one
But I forgot he will be a pain in the bottom
Anyways I did what he said
And this will teach me not to do it again


I learn from my mistakes throughout my life
I almost stabbed my foot with a knife
So from now on wards I will always be his slave

So I promised him that I will not do it again.

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