What family means to me
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Family is one the most important things in your life so if I were you I would spend as much time with my family throughout my life, you never know what comes around in your family's life including yours.
For family is everything to me because they have feed,looked after me and always supporting me and if that is you family then you should be grateful for they have done to you for over the past years from when you were born to this moment and to me I am very grateful for what they do.
For me I spend as much time with my family as I can because you will never what will to your family's life and your life especially mine and your mum because they are the ones that have gave birth to and looked after you throughout all this time. Me and my mum are very close we will do everything together like have launch, go out to the park and even cleaning the house. And if you are very close to any of your family members then enjoy most of your life with them.
And here is the final bit of my story. To me family is a huge thing in my life and if family means nothing to you then what the hell is wrong with you. But for me I have not seen my parents in eight years and I am very excited of going back to america and I hope that you have learnt something from my story.
2 comments:
Hi Joshua
You are right money can't buy happiness. Family is the most important thing in life and I hope other people can see that.
Malo e Lelei Joshua
Your piece of writing are amazing. We all know that family means so much to us especially when one of our siblings are lost. Keep up the good work and can't wait to see more posts :)(:
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